Comments on one of my songs please.

[MentaL]

Hi,

I been playing about with the guitar, recorded a track and well I was hoping for some comments, note, im not the best guitar player but my aim was to go for a more "freaky sound" here is the original;

http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/themental.mp3

Note, I dual layered both guitars and didnt use no effect, direct to soundcard so ingore the bad quality, and here is the edited extended version.

http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/themental-extended.mp3

Song title; The MentaL.


Comments?


EDIT;

http://www.myspace.com/therondayvoo

Add that to your myspace.

 

[Colonel]

was actually something serious. sounded alrite too.

 

[MentaL]

if u visit level me.net and check that song, thats me but that was just messing about.

 

[Killmaster]

The Level ME was well funny.

 

[Jambo]

personal opinion...crap lol but it does sound ok but not my sort of music


R.I.P pavarotty!

HTID!

 

[MentaL]

i prefer metal but prefer to play melody

 

[czeldabolg]

Sounded alright, but some parts just didnt flow.

Hard to explain what i mean, if you understand you understand lol if ya don't ya don't i'll try explain it better at some point ^^

 

[MentaL]

Sounded alright, but some parts just didnt flow.

Hard to explain what i mean, if you understand you understand lol if ya don't ya don't i'll try explain it better at some point ^^

Care to explain? Everything is in the correct Key and rhythem.

 

[JealY]

Learn how to play Battery intro (by metallica - covered recently by Machine Head <3) and then teach me...

Bit late for me to listen atm bud i'll check it out tomorrow

P.S, i've got a 12 inch dick, nah i'm only kidding.

 

[Colonel]

kidding about the 12 inch dick or that you'll listen to it tomorrow?

 

[MentaL]

Been working on a new one with a friend, it needs allot of work, guitar needs more vibrato but ill work on that soon and also I may alter the solo slightly... The bass line has already been done but I aint got round to adding it yet as I need to go to my mates house for that, and the drums are done by a friend. (Both guitars by myself.. and done badly).
http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/HORROR-extended.wma

Comments welcome.

 

[EMPEROR]

1ST one sounded well off tune sorry. 2nd sounded much better. (Not my kind off music)

 

[MentaL]

The final version should be finished tomorrow, ill be using my other guitar to record it, better pickups and doesnt come out of tune as easy, one i used above is my **** guitar lol.

 

[MentaL]

http://www.myspace.com/therondayvoo

Add me to your myspace pwz

 

[czeldabolg]

Care to explain? Everything is in the correct Key and rhythem.

Well it just didnt quite piece together for me, at parts it sounded wrong and didnt flow, at other's it sounded brill though.

At 00:41, it sounds a bit rushed towards an ending.

The opening sounded good but 1st time i heard it didnt sound brill (played it twice btw lol)

Not sure if that helps explaining it...

 

[MentaL]

cheers bro appreciate the input.

 

[bestbet]

yo upload the ******* songs please they funnneeh lol

 

[czeldabolg]

HORROR - extended, sounded much better man, only bit im worried about is at 1:23 it seemed a bit screwed up, you may have messed up not too sure.

Also well done =)

 

[MentaL]

horror has been resampled.. its got an edited ending just aint on the myspace ; demo it here http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/meandtyrone/horror - resample.mp3


Some of horror prob be redone too, I used my ****ty guitar to record it and it tends to come out of tune.... so ill be using my yamaha.

 

[MentaL]

http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/The Ron-Day-Voo/The Ron-Day-Voo - Horror.mp3

finished this song now.