Another Lyrical G Production

[Sawell]

Opinions please.

 

[ipixel]

bit bland, colors are a little too dull for my liking.

 

[Ragnar]

I dont like the colours.

 

[Jicaa]

Slightly improved version

 

[ipixel]

i dont like the filter ***** effect, the lens flare ruins it.

 

[Jicaa]

i dont like the filter ***** effect, the lens flare ruins it.

look mate, i'd prefer it if you didnt comment on my work anymore, weather it's positive or negative feed back. I've had quite enough of you.

edit:

A green version uploaded

 

[Shard]

Hmm...I really like it :S Nice work.

 

[Stop]

It's crap.

Can't really tell you how to improve on it because it would involve starting from scratch.

:doggy!:

 

[ipixel]

look mate, i'd prefer it if you didnt comment on my work anymore, weather it's positive or negative feed back. I've had quite enough of you.

edit:

A green version uploaded

sorry bud, im here to stay, and shall continue to comment as long as i mod this section.

Threaten my mod position, go on.

Not the first time you have.

 

[Pyraine]

that's quite nice that, think you could choose a better font mind you