For fu<k sake, why does this forum have to be so fu<king disrespectful. Every single person who put his piece down did not offer any guidance, and didn't even try to pick up on a good point about it.
Hey stickly, it isn't all bad, and I can see where you were coming from. Maybe try placing the image on a simple background that goes with the image, maybe a light-going grunge effect or something.
Try adding a few styles of boarder to it, I personally think a simple black boarder would be a good start.
I also do like your choice in font for the image, I think it goes really well, spot on choice! The placement isn't great tho, try making it more central on the vertical axis.
Good luck!
Edit: Oh, and don't let these pr!cks get you down! Try and try again