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[Lomcnviewer]

(WILL SHOW SHORTLY ...PLEASE WAIT...)
i made this because i was bored and was planning on using godfather as my new ingame name if its not already taken :P
Only a begginer
what do you think, please leave comment and suggestions pls

Thx /Lomcnviewer

 

[Madman]

Only bit that looks abit dodge is the writing that flashes, rest looks good. Aint got no tips for yu tho, as im crap with paintshop :P

 

[Lomcnviewer]

Only bit that looks abit dodge is the writing that flashes, rest looks good. Aint got no tips for yu tho, as im crap with paintshop :P

:P kk thx, i can take flash off too, jst thought a gif would be nice ^^

 

[Madman]

:P kk thx, i can take flash off too, jst thought a gif would be nice ^^

I like the flash for the bottom wirint (small) but the big flash dnt look rite in my eyes :P

 

[Lomcnviewer]

k ty 4 comment ill edit it in abit

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

im no expert but it all looks abit cramped and too much there if you get me ? but that is my opinion

 

[Mask]

remove the "o" and lower the image of the guy with the gun, so the end of the gun replaces the o, thats a start :P

 

[Skyline]

The Godfather text is too much.

The flash effect also looks atad "tacky" to be honest!

 

[Lomcnviewer]

The Godfather text is too much.

The flash effect also looks atad "tacky" to be honest!

k giv me 5 ill edit it...

wat u think og this 1?

P.S. jst made it

 

[Skyline]

That ones better imo

 

[Lomcnviewer]

That ones better imo

thx here is another + the edited image

 

[Mask]

looking better, change the godfather font to something abit nicer, in most cases the best fonts are the most simple ones. and change the glow around the text to white.

also the change the yellow glow on the bottom text to white, lift the text up more and centre it. and maybe remove the black and white image, it doesnt really fit in.

 

[Primal]

remove the "o" and lower the image of the guy with the gun, so the end of the gun replaces the o, thats a start :P

what i thought when i saw it, wud look well better with the end of gun as the o

 

[Skyline]

Looking better, but as Mask says, change the GODFATHER font now

Make it something so the O fro mthe gun stands out more.

 

[Lomcnviewer]

kk ty all 4 comments, giv us another 5 and ill see wat can do :P

~EDIT~ oki i tried 2 make the "O" stand out abit more by adding a basic shape in the middle of the gun nd adding a glow , i have changed the text 2 sumink simpler, more comments pls

P.S. any other idea's on how 2 make the "O" stand out? dont think it looks too good like tht ><

 

[Skyline]

No, no no.

Looks even worse now mate.

Ditch the big daft fonts and go with something simple. No need to add any glow around the gun, just use a font that fits in better... Like a simple font with no glow!

 

[Lomcnviewer]

No, no no.

Looks even worse now mate.

Ditch the big daft fonts and go with something simple. No need to add any glow around the gun, just use a font that fits in better... Like a simple font with no glow!

k ><

ditched the big bold fonts, gone for something simple and thin, took the glow back off the gun, kept a little glow on the text otherwise it wouldnt be visible

 

[Skyline]

Looks better to me

 

[Mask]

sorry i meant the yellow text not the glow,

font is still bad :P try something abit more bold looking imo.

Try aerial bold, maybe

 

[Lomcnviewer]

Looks better to me

hehe thx , couldnt of done it witout u lot