Blue Trance

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Dark12345

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My first of the graphic genre....

feedback please , good and bad.



Shot at 2007-07-23
Shot at 2007-07-23
 
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Colonel

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I dont like the square black bit and the cut off where it goes into a diff shade of blue at the bottom. maybe it could do with the shape of the womens boob there too (Y) :P
 

Dark12345

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alryt i will do , but atm im taking a break , u don't know how long that took me , i was trying all kinds of new things out i never usually do.
 

Dark12345

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Well i tried a little something.
Its not entirely what you wanted , but i minimized it down , got rid of the black emboss border thing and added inside shadow .

My opinion , looks just as good maybe even better...


Shot at 2007-07-23
 

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Erm, It's like a jungle of random effects, IT could look ok if some were removed... But the thing that made me instantly think gtfo... Was the choice of blue =/ Colour choice usually makes and breaks it for me and I can't stand pure primary colours