Chocolate (Sort of)

[elohelMeight]

I was messing about in ps yesterday. And came up with this piece I was just messing around with browns and im sure that in ps it looked a lighter shade than it does on the piece now i thought it lookedlike choclate being sturred ob the right... so its called chocolate lol. but anyways, here it is:



Constructive Crit please

 

[DayWalker™]

I love it, 9/10 for this one, try and not use too many lines going accross it kind of hides the design.

/Stan

 

[RedDragonX]

fair try, 5/10

/20 chars

 

[Wittin]

Love it, abstract detailed and supprisingly smooth. The colours are great, brown when used correctly isn't dull at all, and thats not a dull piece of art if you ask me .

There are only 3 things i can think of to improve this:

-Attention to detail on text - chose a smooth font, and really spend time on your placement. (and maybe colour, it's a little hard to read)
-Sharpness on the right hand side of the design, it looks a little blured, just use the sharpen brush tool to go over it.
-BOARDER!! lol

Great piece overall easily a
7 / 10

 

[elohelMeight]

Thanks for your comments people.

@lyrical :
-I didn't want any text really as i like the piece just plain. But i thought i'd give the piece a name, so added text (tried to make it so it was out of the way)
-Somebody else commented on the sharpness. But they said the opposite, they said it was too sharp on the left ill try do something to sort it.
-I usualy use a border, but wasnt sure what colour would go nicely. Any suggestions?

Thanks

 

[w00t84]

Just a typical border would do for what you need. Maybe 1pixel white? and just fade.