imo
the font used on the "death is his business and business is good" look disgraceful
and originality, Hitman sigis have been done too many times
however on thie first sigi i do like the positioning of the render and the positioning of your name, and the font used on your name
overall first one - 6/10
overall second one - 5/10 (would score higher but the big quote, ruins the whole piece imo