homemade spell

[DiabloVodkaShot]

Ok first ever attempt with this...
ive learnt to do this in about 3 days so it isnt brilliant...

but i am learning


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tHquQZ8lA38

2nd attempt:
Skill 1:Colour Puff
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW3mPqsGIWM

just learning really ill upload more when i start designing them. Need tips and stuff ideas etc please...

BUT PLEASE REMEMBER ITS MY FIRST ATTEMPT

 

[Bon]

not bad for a 1st attempt

lacks imagination tho imo, its just like a firework rly lol

 

[Orphanmaker1]

Not really worth posting..

 

[Andreas]

he posted it for us to give him tips n ideas

and btw for 1st attemp looks rly good
keep practice :agree:

 

[Prai]

The looks will go well with a spell that maybe dazes mobs. Just looks the part.

And orphan. Dont be a hypocrite.

 

[ChiliPepper]

pretty good for a first attempt, keep it up

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

cheers guys im gna put loads of colours within it and different particles will show you my other version later today when i fix after affects

 

[Lucafer]

what program u use to make these spell? wudnt mind given it ago

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

after effects buddie

New Effect :

Skill 1:Colour Puff
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW3mPqsGIWM

 

[Primal]

after effects buddie

New Effect :

Skill 1:Colour Puff
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW3mPqsGIWM

u use guides? where u find em

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

nah mate no guides but if ur intrested i recomend cartoonsmart.com

 

[Prai]

The Colour Puff thingy wouldnt suit Mir one bit. Sorry.

 

[transporter]

The Colour Puff thingy wouldnt suit Mir one bit. Sorry.

Agreed.

First one would work though, i`d use it as some sort of healing spell.

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

okay thanks guys

 

[Bon]

The Colour Puff thingy wouldnt suit Mir one bit. Sorry.

thats what i was gonna say


u need to have a serious think, and try come up with some ideas that would really fit into mir

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

ok well post away to help in possible guys :P

new Magic

Thunder Shock:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6QVaICww_g

 

[transporter]

Thats not impressive, i really like the first one but the other 2 suck. Hope my feeback doesn`t hurt your feelings, just trying to help you.

 

[SmavidDavid]

I think you need to concentrate on your first one and improve it. Why make 100 ****ty magics (like the last you you've done, sorry but i think they r ****) When you could spend a 2 to 3 days, making one elite, amazing spell?

People would be more likley to use your spells then. Not being a twat here, but i m sure people agree, take time and put effort into one.. and your get more thanks and glory than from 10 not so good ones.

They all got potentials, but need alot mroe work put into them to give them that "mir" feel.

 

[DiabloVodkaShot]

cheers for the feed back ive made the 3rd one now look like real lighting with a thunder drop at the end really impressed with it im just animating it at the moment

 

[Omen_lom]

like the others said, the first one is better considerably, so keep working at it and endeavour to get better at what your doing. Hope to see progress