is this npc script ok?

[w00t84]

;Info [ Npc Name{Danielle} X=328 Y=267 MapName={Bichon-Province} ]

[@main]
Welcome, i can let you have different monsters, \
are you intrested? \ \
<Yes, tell me more/@mob>\
<No/@exit>

[@mob]
Please choose a mob you would like to rent: \\
<Oma/@rentoma> \
<EvilTongs/@giveTong> \
<None/@exit>

[@rentoma]
#IF
checkgold 10000
#ACT
goto @giveoma
#ELSESAY
You do not have enough gold!\ \
<Oops/@exit>

[@giveTong]
#ACT
goto @givetong

[@giveoma]
#ACT
take gold 10000
mapmove mapguard x y
timerecall 60
mapmove map x326 y265
Param1 map
Param2 326
Param3 265
MonGen Oma 1 1
close

[@givetong]
#ACT
MonGen EvilTongs 1 1
close

 

[w00t84]

bump

 

[Tripwire]

well if your trying to get the npc to give a pet then no it wont work... but if your trying just to spawn a mob then i think it might do (never actually tried it -.-) but if u r trying to make it give a pet do this :

[@giveoma]
#ACT
take gold 10000
mapmove mapguard x y
timerecall 60
mapmove map x326 y265
Param1 map
Param2 326
Param3 265
marry mob Oma
close

[@givetong]
#ACT
marry mob EvilTongs
close

 

[w00t84]

cheers m8