Ma 1st big job

Mu online season 21 - grand opening

RedDragonX

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The big picture is a bit blurry, also the text colour needs changing, the sig looks o.k, i like your current one much better.
 

Dark12345

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im afraid i don't like either of them :/
the filters are put on badly and the big one isn't just a render with sketch filter on is it lol ?
 

Killmaster

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tbh I'm not to fond of any of your work, but don't mean to put you down or anything.
 

Misticolu50

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kk KM ta but i am a novice i start on doing graphics last night at 1 clock so am juse testing but i think am improving here is ma latest



Not so sure on font i might change
 

czeldabolg

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kk KM ta but i am a novice i start on doing graphics last night at 1 clock so am juse testing but i think am improving here is ma latest



Not so sure on font i might change

this one isn't too bad it seems okish just the text dosen't go well, again use a simple font its a much nicer effect, first one you killed dmc the picture is now horrible no affence, DMC3 fans would cry lol, 2nd one horrible stop using backgrounds like that!!!!

8/30

8<<<for the one above.
 

OoOoOo24

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kk KM ta but i am a novice i start on doing graphics last night at 1 clock so am juse testing but i think am improving here is ma latest



Not so sure on font i might change

this ones accually really good, except the font is sucky, change the font color + the font... then maybe try n fade it into the background a bit.
 

Sawell

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kk KM ta but i am a novice i start on doing graphics last night at 1 clock so am juse testing but i think am improving here is ma latest



Not so sure on font i might change

I don't believe you've done anything more than crop an existing image and stick font on it.

Sorry, but looking at your eye for colour there's no way you made that contrast between those shades of blue and red in the background.
 

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I don't believe you've done anything more than crop an existing image and stick font on it.

Sorry, but looking at your eye for colour there's no way you made that contrast between those shades of blue and red in the background.

I think Hammykins is right if i knew wot that image was of i would look for it and see if he is. im sure hes just cut a small part of it out and put a font on there and tried 2 claim it as his own.

If im wrong however its v.nice but the font Sux!
 

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maybe he followed a tutorial and added his own text?

Anyway, keep at it mate. You'll get the hang of it soon enough, i'm sure.
 

Joopers*

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Maybe, but i remember doing a tutorial when i first started and it turned out really crap lol so a few more to follow.. :S
 

Sawell

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maybe he followed a tutorial and added his own text?

Anyway, keep at it mate. You'll get the hang of it soon enough, i'm sure.

That would be one hell of an advanced tutorial for a newbie without a stock background image.

I doubt it very much.