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Rampage

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Dec 22, 2003
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Aint done anything in quite a while now, and started messing about. My old designs never really had a theme nor a meaning, so I decided I'd put more thought into this one.

Thoughts and opinions guys.

Finished3hours.jpg


/Steish of course :)
 

Stonehelm

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Apr 14, 2004
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I Dont like it, it doesnt "gel" together at all. There is no flow to it.

The concepts a good idea but i dont think you pulled it off.
 

czeldabolg

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Sep 12, 2005
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Staffordshire, UK
Aint done anything in quite a while now, and started messing about. My old designs never really had a theme nor a meaning, so I decided I'd put more thought into this one.

Thoughts and opinions guys.

Finished3hours.jpg


/Steish of course :)

Must admit i do like the effect here but the enthusiasm text is horrible, struggled to read at first but could be me. colours ok green dosent look to nice though +get rid of the white circle or fill it the same colour.

8/10 your old work was your best and this piece im not the fondest of mate. sorry.
 

Josh123

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Dec 10, 2006
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Dont worry czeld i Couldnt read it at all untill you said.
I really like this peice though, I never see any work around LOMCN that I like so never bother saying anything, but this peice is great, just the Enthusiasm text should be changed 9/10
 

Rampage

Golden Oldie
Golden Oldie
Dec 22, 2003
662
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Coalville, Leicestershire
Aint done anything in quite a while now, and started messing about. My old designs never really had a theme nor a meaning, so I decided I'd put more thought into this one.

Thoughts and opinions guys.

Finished3hours.jpg


/Steish of course :)

lks gd m8

i'd change the enthusiasm text tho to make it more understandable
and possibly change the colour of the squares under colour red n green dont quite go together

/Ste (not steish)