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elohelMeight

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I just wanted to post my new lyrics to see what people thought.

Theres summit new im on the scene and im cutting through,
I'll beat ya til ya black and fkin blue,
Your gal sucks d*ck but you suck it 2,
You cant chat about s*it your chattin nothin new,
And i've heard it all before,
Been there done it i got the t-shirt and im on the draw,
Better scream if ya lookin for more,

because because because because yo,

I'll remind ya of the days and the ways of the krays its a gangster phase,
Where everybody knows ill be the G that blaze,
Nobody chats bout your games these days ya no,
Raw Shaw pretty boy but short,
And you really dont want any body knocking at ya door,
Or, Ya window or cat flap thats that,
Standin over your bed busting a big black gat.

A'yo,

You ready for my killer instinct,
Sit and watch eminem kill off n-sync,
Hear the mysteries making them think,
We phychopaths but still missin ten links,
Good-bye cos your links the weakest,
Your flows the bleakest,
Your the clothes are the cheapest (short pause) s*it that ive ever seen,
Your getting lean on ever green,
And your the worst theres ever been.

Give me tips please. Need tips asap
 

Peart

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heres a tip: stop writing lyrics based around how badly you can insult people :tard:
 

elohelMeight

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theres the whole point of those specific lyrics.

its for a battle / competition im having this friday. they need to be affensive
 

Wittin

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Look ok to me, but here is probably not the best place to post them if you want serious advise/tips.
 

Peart

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MentaL said:
I am the master,
i have a ghetto blaster,

ir ock

ur ghetto blaster sucks n is old
but my ghetto blaster is good n u got TOLD



OOOOOOHHH
 

Peart

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My phonograph pwns you back to the 19th century

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Ragnar

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Funny seeing a eleven year old idiot trying to be a gangsta rapper.

Unless you are battling against 4 year olds, you are bound to loose.
 

Wond

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Not bad but as someone else said, not a good place to post if you want serious advise. You will most probably be laughed at by most of the idiots on here.
 

DayWalker™

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Middlesbrough ! Smoggy!
Chavs wanting to be black?

Nero you know **** talk **** and probablly eat **** now **** off and stop making an ass of yourself.

Chavs hate African / asian / muslim people you would know this if you even knew what chavs were.

/Stan
 

elohelMeight

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@Ragnar : im 16. and more mature then you.

@Nero : i dont want to be black. its called music. you have your tates, i have mine.

@Wittin / Wond : suppose. most people on here have an iq level smaller then a goldfish

@DayWalker : well said.

@Nero : as daywalker said. chavs hate any other race basically.