New Map Made by Me :)

Desolation Mir2 (Med Rate Server)

Jamie

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Well can you point out whats wrong with it pls :D
(Ignor the line going down on the left pls >.< )
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Ragnar

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Need to work on the floor more, it looks too boring right now.
 

Far

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looks ok. but the area uve got the houses (shops) really looks stupid. make them fit together.
 

Toxick

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work on the tiles, they look ****,

add some objects like dead trees or cracks on the objects, there are noting.

the PB object in there looks complety out of place.

and again, the tiles are awful
 

Slanesh

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Put a border around your town and add a bit more detail to it. Boundaries look good :)

You also dont need to put anything on top of your cliffs - they won't be seen unless they're right on the edge, or if you let people walk on them...
 

Richens

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Looks okay, structured well. Quite small though isn't it? Like Slanesh said, needs more detail, and the mud tiles are quite straight in some points.. Randomise them up a bit.. Make the map look more authentic.

Good mini levelin/quest map - 4/10