Plain web banner (Animation)

[-Raz0rfang-]

Just made a Plain Web Banner, So yes it's suppost to be just black, with some animation (Fading text)

This is the 3rd peice of animation I've ever done .

Constructive comments please.

 

[Rebel.]

Its the worst animation ever, even a trained moth could do it.

 

[Liandrin2]

Constructive comments please.

Sorry, but I can't try to be very constructive about that?

Did you even think about anything? The text looks crap, it jumps from one place to another and isn't placed anywhere, it's simply off centre.

I can't comment on anything other than the text, cos there is nothing.

 

[Stonehelm]

Just made a Plain Web Banner, So yes it's suppost to be just black, with some animation (Fading text)

This is the 3rd peice of animation I've ever done .

Constructive comments please.

Haha .

 

[DayWalker™]

Maybe add a border change the text and add a lighter background, as of now 2/10 with border etc 5/10.

/Stan

 

[-Raz0rfang-]

Re-made it so it's got something to it.
Any better?

 

[Liandrin2]

Any better?

Nope, just as bad, give up?

 

[-Raz0rfang-]

Nope, just as bad, give up?

No .

 

[Rebel.]

I honestly would just give up

 

[Eskimo]

No .

For once I think I'll help you a bit.

Maybe make the red/black fuse into one another with a gradient (any type of gradient)
Stop the text from moving so fast and jumping to different places in such a quick time.
If you want them to jump about, lower the time and choose very different places, not places close to each other.
Add a border.

Or yeah, give up.

 

[Wond]

"With chat rooms and all" Couldn't make it sound worse if you tried.

 

[w00t84]

Hmmm, so much for constructive critiscm. Those people who are here today and are brilliant designers didn't give up because a few dafties went and said their work was bad, they simply ignored them and didn't post there work for the viewing pleasure of those prats.

Look at the likes of LG, I bet he didn't start out as fkin awesome as he is now, speaking of LG, where he at? ^_^

To be honest, no, it's not good, and yes, it does need work. No need for all the 'Just give up' because it's not going to happen, post constructive critiscm or fk off.