Poetry =X

[DannyBoy06]

Id like help writing an 8 line short love poem.

No rude bits, she's 16 years old aswell btw. Needs to be wrote today.

Thanx in advance if anybody can help me.

 

[elohelMeight]

You, Me, a bottle of wine, i make that pimms o'clock... all thats needed

The love i have for you is so strong and true,
Me and you forever just stuck like glue?
lol

Im thinking of you every day and night,
Thats why i talk about you in every song i write?
lol

I know that we are perfect and right,
Cos' we were in love from that very first sight?
lol

Everytime im with you my heart races,
I wanna be with you and take you all these places?
lol

Girl you know that your mine,
Slow down cos' it takes time?
lol

Its clear to me that your the 1 for me, your the 1,
Alright now girl plz can you hold on,
Bein committed.. hmm.. 2 young,
you cant say bye girl this is all fun.

These just some random lyrics from the top of my head, if you want proper ones ask me lol. Im not sure what sorrt of lyrics you wanted, for example, if youve been in a long relationship, if you know her and want to ask her out, if you have split up and she is on your mind? You'll have to tell what kind of lyrics you want.

 

[DannyBoy06]

Amg that'll do greatly. Cheers

 

[elohelMeight]

No probs .

 

[Gamedude]

Baaaaaaaaah. Young love.

 

[DannyBoy06]

Still trying to win her over you see

 

[Opeth]

poetry isnt impressive or romantic, its just cheesy.

if you want to impress her, show her your wang.

 

[jamessss]

rofl opeth, wang ftw heres something to say;



You say;

"Do you like Chicken?"

Hopefully she'll say "yes"

if so, you say "do you want stuffing"

and if she says "yes" well, ill let you go to that further step.

 

[Gamedude]

poetry isnt impressive or romantic, its just cheesy.

if you want to impress her, show her your wang.

So that's what I've been doing wrong.

 

[elohelMeight]

Yer Opeth is correct... but unfortunetly it dont work for him... girls just dont seem to be attracted to his 'wang' :P