Well lets see. I actually take back the comment of the image beign unclear, on second thoughts it actually looks ok. It's the font thats killing me. Also the line across, I've only ever seen that go well with a pixel font.
That font is just.....budget. Try something alot more proffesional. Remember, 3D/Bumpy fonts aren't realyl proffesional, neither are effect on the baclground, like glass etc. Solid fill looks way better simply because it is crisp. That's not just for you, it's for all the toy artists around here. Simple is best, solid fill text wins all the time, every time.