Song with my new band =)

[Shard]

http://www.thenextobsession.co.uk/Tonight.wma

I'm the lead singer. I shouldn't have sung. I got a cold coming along =( Umm, I muck up at the end of both verses, and at the end of the bridge, and in the first chorus. Voice isn't naturally that high. Comments please, and I can picture the flames coming now

 

[ENOZEGAR]

Good use of harmonics, the bass at the start i would say is a little off. Overall it is a decent track, i recognize those power chords riffs similarity to another song tho.

I give joo 8/10!

 

[Shard]

Thanks a lot. Harmonics yeah, the rhythm guitarist loves them. Bass was off yeah, so hard to record one instrument by one. Hmm, what song :O I can listen to it.

 

[Vannaroth]

I dunno somehow the drum riff during the harmonic verse bits make the overall sound too kinda confusing and ''busy''. Also his fills could do with a bit more colour.

bah i cant put my finger on it, the solo at the end is great though.

8/10

 

[Turin]

Did you record that in the a studio? You're voice doesn't come out too clear above the racket.

I can't honestly comment on this type of music, because it isn't my genre of taste, but otherwise you have a great voice and talent, hope you and your band get far

Turin

ps - Any chance we can get a transcript of the lyrics?

 

[Rick-e]

Not my kind of music, however, I liked it. I must say though some of it sounds very Nirvana.

Good job though, 7/10. When you record some more, upload them!

 

[Turin]

Yea what rick-e said, and you're getting free publicity on my side lol. I've put you in the 'Weekly Wiz' section of the school newspaper, so other's can get to your song + comment, if I get any constructive feedback, I'll pass it on to you.

Turin

 

[Dataforce]

Thats what you voice sounds like all the time shardy! (is Griffo the rhythm guitarist? and who is the drums?)

Did yous make that song yourself? or is it just a cover?

Comments:

@~00:47 a solo starts and all the background dissapears, i think this sounds quite weird (again @ ~1:40)

Your singing is actually quite better than i thought, but its too quiet compared to the music, your voice track needs to be louder.

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I quite like it, i would lsiten to it again. Howver, in school and to your face i will pretend to hate it, and only have listened to the first bit before turning it off.

have a nice day :P

 

[Shard]

Thanks a lot Turin

Thanks for the comments. Shane, you smell. Pretend to love it and I'll luff you long time.

Anyway, this isn't a cover. This is with my new band, Carl doesn't feature on it. Hmm, me being louder, bah, my voice is off in most bits, ahh well.

 

[K4ng4r00]

Not my type of music =/, i noticed u went off a few times :P

i cant really say much, i have a terrible voice

- Jicaa

 

[kud125]

sounds awesome mr. shard

im doing a studio engineering course, so if you ever need any help or advice just pm me thru msn m8, so heres a few points you might consider for recording purposes etc:

• try making your vocals a bit more clear
• also try mic'ing up the bass kick on the kit, if you have already done this then boost the gain a bit more

all i can think of atm :P will update list

 

[>DMX<]

Dont like tbh, probably because it isn't my sorta music that lad can't sing/shout tbh =/.

 

[Eskimo]

Dont like tbh, probably because it isn't my sorta music that lad can't sing/shout tbh =/.

That lad is shard.
And I disagree.
I think it's a good voice.
Yeah it could do with some training for a little bit longer,
But there is nothing wrong with it.

Very good Shard. :]

 

[Shard]

Dont like tbh, probably because it isn't my sorta music that lad can't sing/shout tbh =/.

Can you please make it clearer on how I can't sing. What am I doing wrong and such. That way I can make myself better and hopefully please everyone.

Thanks Jamie *mwah*

 

[>DMX<]

Can you please make it clearer on how I can't sing. What am I doing wrong and such. That way I can make myself better and hopefully please everyone.

Thanks Jamie *mwah*

Just sounds like whaling to me lol, but maybe im biased.

 

[Shard]

Wailing? Hmm...and what do you mean biased. Biased against what :S

 

[Rick-e]

Shard, this is coming from a guy who is clearly a pure rap fan.

Because rap artists are amazing singers and all.

 

[Shard]

I thought that much. I was going to say something but I couldn't put it very well. Thanks hehe.

 

[>DMX<]

Shard, this is coming from a guy who is clearly a pure rap fan.

Because rap artists are amazing singers and all.

Cleary not smartarse, i like all type's of music and i dont listen to rap that often. So before trying to look clever dont bother. Biasd in the way i dont like that music and wont pay much attention.

 

[FUTURA]

love the beat. guitar is great. vocals....im not a fan of sorry. i think if didnt sing it so high pitched it would be way better. Eg. of the vocals being average - 1 min 11.

its aight, but i wud turn it off if it came on the radio.