Song with my new band =)

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Thanks a lot Turin :)

Thanks for the comments. Shane, you smell. Pretend to love it and I'll luff you long time.

Anyway, this isn't a cover. This is with my new band, Carl doesn't feature on it. Hmm, me being louder, bah, my voice is off in most bits, ahh well.

Who is in the band then ?
 

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Dataforce said:
Who is in the band then ?
Me, I'm the Manager.

Seriously though ;o nice introduction to your band Shard =] and great work I wasn't expecting perfection first thing ofcourse because everyone starts somewhere and I have to say I'm impressed. I look forward to hearing yet again when your cold is gone and you have re-recorded it. I'm no musical expert so I don't know all about the riffs etc etc, But I know when I hear good stuff ^_^ and this surely has potential.

Stone - Calm down bud, *Waves* <3

/JaY[!]
 

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Kids expect a band to be perfect first off, Soul.
I love shard's voice.
As I said in my last post.
The kids can all fúck off if they won't give proper critisism.
 

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Kids expect a band to be perfect first off, Soul.
Well the only answer to that is,

I guess they should suck upon their Mother's-Teet that little bit longer =]

Wait until they grow up that Large-Amount more, And then finally put together the 'so called' "Criticism"

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Well tbh i would buy ur cd :P lol good guitars nice bass keeps the rythem tbh i think your singing is great course its a bit fuzzy but like u said u got a cold u will get better :) but atm its ace as it is :) dont forget about mir if u become all rich an all :) u should make a song about mir lol like summin called *i belive in a thing called PK* or *highway to Pk* *back in red* "bad boys bad boys what ya gonna do, what ya gonna do when a gm comes for you" :P lol
 

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Well the instrumental work is "ok" but your voice does kinda sound lame and destroys the music. Lyrcs are pretty bland also but I guess it's your first try. Your singing sounds pretty much like every other band out there in the "rock" genre...Try doing something original with your voice sing in a diffrent way. You asked for opinion and heres mine in all intention giving productive critisism.
 

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Dalisu said:
Well tbh i would buy ur cd :P lol good guitars nice bass keeps the rythem tbh i think your singing is great course its a bit fuzzy but like u said u got a cold u will get better :) but atm its ace as it is :) dont forget about mir if u become all rich an all :) u should make a song about mir lol like summin called *i belive in a thing called PK* or *highway to Pk* *back in red* "bad boys bad boys what ya gonna do, what ya gonna do when a gm comes for you" :P lol


You play mir too much...
 

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@ Stone : It's people from John Brights and drummer from...umm...St Davids is it , Llandudno?

@ LordLucas : My voice isn't naturally that high so it was quite hard to sing that. Gonna rewrite it, lyrics and all, to suit my voice more and then get back to you when we record next :)
 

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voice very out of positioning and tone etc, does ma head in just listeneed to it again to make sure was true, i actually asked my mum n dad i said what do you think to this music mum n dad n they said ****e lol no joke, both of them came out wiv a comment and was same lol ^^. And thats no joke lol.
 

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Warez said:
voice very out of positioning and tone etc, does ma head in just listeneed to it again to make sure was true, i actually asked my mum n dad i said what do you think to this music mum n dad n they said ****e lol no joke, both of them came out wiv a comment and was same lol ^^. And thats no joke lol.

And like omg lol.


Soul <3 :wavee:
 
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Warez: We dont care what you think, why in gods name would we care what your parents think?

Heres one thing I dont like though: the cliche anti-climax after the intro. You know, where its got some really heavy riff and then goes into a more melodic state, I know too many songs which do that.

God every single person saying the song is crap so clearly knows nothing about music whatsoever. The solo at the end is fantastic.
 

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Warez said:
voice very out of positioning and tone etc, does ma head in just listeneed to it again to make sure was true, i actually asked my mum n dad i said what do you think to this music mum n dad n they said ****e lol no joke, both of them came out wiv a comment and was same lol ^^. And thats no joke lol.

That's truly disrespectful Warez, if you're going to act like that then maybe you should consider keeping your opinions off the internet; it may well be a place which promotes free expression, but it has its limitations. This is a small supporting community, not imdb.

If you can't respect the utility you have been given to talk to others within this community, then you're not worth an account. I don't mean to be so blunt, but that kind of senseless statement is really not a help to the already damaged morale of this forum.

To get back on topic:

I really like your music Stone. I think you have a good band, your vocals are a well needed relief from most bands in that genre, who try but fail, or just resort to uncontrolled shouting.

You yourself could go far, your band too. But if you want it you're really going to have to push, there are a lot of awesome bands who never make it because they don't make the chance happen, and a lot of bad ones who get far from a lucky break!

Make sure you keep us updated on any new songs bud, and don't let people like Warez get you down, although I know you won't.
 

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its a ok song but not my kind of genre as other ppl have said but i think u keep working u cud make it to pros ;) of heavy metal/rock/genre u want lol
 

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Thanks Valerii, isn't Stone in the band though :P

I've got my scream back again now. Just got back from practise with my other band. Did some nice screams in Audioslave and RATM :)
 

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Shard said:
Thanks Valerii, isn't Stone in the band though :P

I've got my scream back again now. Just got back from practise with my other band. Did some nice screams in Audioslave and RATM :)

Oops, my bad. Stone, Shard... same difference!
 

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Ohhh noes you didn't ;o

Don't make me list the differences <3 =]

'NEVER' make that mistake again.

/JaY[!]


Sir, yes sir. =]
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and 50 cent can't sing, along with lots of other rappers.. all they do is talk to a beat, where's the talent in that?

i didnt mind it, the drummer sounded a bit over enthusiastic(sp?) at parts, but appart from that i didnt mind it, ure voice isn't that bad, i'm sure you can work on it and get better, also how old are you? because if ure still pretty young ure voice will mature, n probs sound better anyway :P

there betta than most ppl. even tho TheGame owns 50 gggg-unot
 

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Listened to it. Loved it. Listened to it again. Loved it. It's great man, keep up the good work, I'm sure if you practice a bit more you might sort out the bits you went off on.

Very good track lovin it.
 

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Hmm shard your voice is promising although their are a couple of floors in it. Maybe if you got some voice coachings etc since you do go off key some times. Not taking the piss or anything but thats what i think. It also is not my type of music which means i probley cant comment on it. hope this helps.

Sidenote: the bit at the end of it were u say "Tooniiiite" sounds rele bad man=/