Please tell me you were kidding, no affence but this was HORRIBLE
a) render sucks just looks like a shadow..
b) background too red, horrible effect used
c) what text are you using its horrible try arial or something AND A COLOUR THAT YOU CAN READ.
2/10
i sense a tiny bit of effort.
'death will be be amoung those who doubtsme!' you mean 'death will be amongst those who doubt me' right? please say you do...