The Nomad Lands

[Dookie]

Haven't made a map for a while, just though i'd share this one with everyone. Took me about 3 days on and off in between bug fixing :P . Connects to the bottom of this map and will be in the first update for Meteora.

Map:

Town:

MiniMap:

It has One "Forest town", two cave entrances and a link to another province (Horizon).

Comments/suggestions welcome

 

[IceSlice]

Very nice detail is good, the forest is awesome, the 2 cave ents are far apart making it harder so yeh nice one. The link to Horizon is a bit weird never seen one like that before but nevertheless, its good.

 

[Richens]

It is good.. A few comments i'd make are...

1> I'd do a close up view of the town, so we can see the further detail within that.
2> Mark where and if any cave entrances are so we can also see them.
3> I would of personally my self made the lighter outer grass in some areas alot wider and more prominent in certain areas with a little less trees so it blends into the outer bit (of no trees)..
4> The paths through the forest do look rather covered up a bit too much, but hey, that may be the look your after!

I do like the connecting bridge though, and the general layout is good for the surroundings.

- 8.5/10

 

[Dookie]

Very nice detail is good, the forest is awesome, the 2 cave ents are far apart making it harder so yeh nice one. The link to Horizon is a bit weird never seen one like that before but nevertheless, its good.

Thanks.

Yea thhe link to Horizon matches up with the bottom of Horizon map, or at least i tried to make it :P

It is good.. A few comments i'd make are...

1> I'd do a close up view of the town, so we can see the further detail within that.
2> Mark where and if any cave entrances are so we can also see them.
3> I would of personally my self made the lighter outer grass in some areas alot wider and more prominent in certain areas with a little less trees so it blends into the outer bit (of no trees)..
4> The paths through the forest do look rather covered up a bit too much, but hey, that may be the look your after!

I do like the connecting bridge though, and the general layout is good for the surroundings.

- 8.5/10

1) Done, see first post Made a little mistake on the gate, but i can cover that up ingame with some well placed atributes.
2) Done, see first post
3) Can see what you mean. Might do a bit of editing.
4)Yea they are suppose to be a bit like that, the story behind this map is the Nomads and the Humans of neighboring Horizon don't get on very well, and to deter visits from the people of Horizon the Nomads allowed the "Dark Forest" to grow wild and out of control.

Thanks for the comments

 

[Richens]

Yeh, good.

Well the town looks fine. Only thing i'd do to it myself is put a few tiny floor details in like bits of wood and other misc things in the ground like darker tile areas and just roughen that look up a bit.

Apart from that goin good.