NoobIsaland

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Setro

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Hi im very new to map making infact i only got the program like yesterday.... i have made a map simple ofc but im thinking of putting on a server me and my freind are going to be running.

im not sure if thisis the one i will put in but this is my first real map i have made i call it noob town because the genral idea is to have that map for all new comers from lvl 0-22 maybe alittle more to be able to level there and learn about the game.This is why it is so basic nothing fancy just somwere they can buy pots and items at a low level and do afew quests.

please share ur thoughts about my map and tell me if im heading in the right direction thanx.

marks out of 10 please and reason u put it so low or hight :)

and here it is

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Setro

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I have now added to the map here is the second town and the full map itself at the moment

1) Second village
NoobVillagewalls.jpg


2) full map
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Xanan

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First 1/10 - Portal doesnt match tiles, nothing to indicate borders of map. Good first attempt tho.

Second 2/10

Overal 2/10
 

Setro

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First 1/10 - Portal doesnt match tiles, nothing to indicate borders of map. Good first attempt tho.

Second 2/10

Overal 2/10

ty but the tiless were changed after that and the map isnt finished still thinking of sticking caves and quest npc's in! :D
 

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First 1/10 - Portal doesnt match tiles, nothing to indicate borders of map. Good first attempt tho.

Second 2/10

Overal 2/10

tbh ur a mug, there good maps n u cant even take a picture with a camera right so u have no right to judge
 

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tbh ur a mug, there good maps n u cant even take a picture with a camera right so u have no right to judge

Fec isn't tryin to give the lad greif. People post their maps here to get opinions to help improve their map making skills.

On topic - Not too bad mate, just remember to mark off edges with cliffs / trees so people can't walk right to the edge of the map.

4/10
 

Xanan

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tbh ur a mug, there good maps n u cant even take a picture with a camera right so u have no right to judge

In all honesty sonshine, would you rather i lied?

I made maps a few years back, i know whats what in the map world.

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m8 those maps aint exciting or by far the best ive seen. and thers nothing constructive bout saying a guys map is 1/10 is ther.
 

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m8 those maps aint exciting or by far the best ive seen. and thers nothing constructive bout saying a guys map is 1/10 is ther.

Xanan said:
Portal doesnt match tiles, nothing to indicate borders of map. Good first attempt tho.

I believe that to be constructive criticism, don't you ?
 

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thats wat i said wasnt constructive.

He is giving constructive criticism i too say those maps are 1/10 the grass tiles are all the same and there is too much shrubbery its a nice size map but may i suggest a cliff going round the edges and a few more trees instead of shrubs and maybe a bit closer together say a forest. And it will be a 7 or 8/10 map,

Constructive?
 
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He is giving constructive criticism i too say those maps are 1/10 the grass tiles are all the same and there is too much shrubbery its a nice size map but may i suggest a cliff going round the edges and a few more trees instead of shrubs and maybe a bit closer together say a forest. And it will be a 7 or 8/10 map,

Constructive?

i think thats very constructive, and i agree with putting more cliffs/forest/water/wall around edge. to many people are making maps with no edges, yes they work, but loook very tacky XD
 

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very constructive and gave plenty of reasons mutated.but for some 1 to say its **** 1/10 and give 1 reason thats wrong with it isnt constructive. personally id say with the edges done it would looks fine as its annoying when ur running on mir and u cant see owt coz all the trees towering above u all u got to go by is dots on ur mini map and glances of ur char thru trees. u just gotta love a trimmed bush :P
 

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lol xanan i remember when u first released them maps.. yeah basicly the tiles dont match its surroundings. the layout is ok but alittle flatted, you kinda know where it all is b4 you even start to move. sometimes its good but when making new maps the wilder the better.. extream maps tend to make good maps.