I THINK IT HAS POTENTIAL
but needs a total makeover
desaturate it (ctrl + shift + u)
and give it a new life by pressing ctrl + u and then ticking colorize and playing around till you get a color you like.
Also you insist on using these far out fonts, well the only way you're gonna make one of them look good is possibly, by while you still have the font selected, at the top where there should be a drop down box with a list like crisp, strong etc. set that to smooth, then give it an effect, but be subtle, like an outer glow that is similar to the color of the rest of the picture and maybe a very slight emboss or a very slight drop shadow and for the love of christ don't make it baby blue, stick to like, black.
Also, a 1 pixel black border is fine and nicer than this red thing.
I personally think if you follow that you will have a very signature