My first map ^^

[BeaverLJ]

http://img362.imageshack.us/full.php?image=map1yr.jpg


im new to the map making thing and i made this wot u think??


/Craig

 

[JadeFox]

Looks good for like a questing/Boss mob place.
/JadeFox

 

[BeaverLJ]

its an island with 2 caves/temples on it

i was thinking about puting a quest on it ^^

 

[JadeFox]

You could even have a mini sort of homezone or town on there to teleport to place and to buy pots and repair and stuff.
/JadeFox

 

[BeaverLJ]

1) wot wud u give it out of 10 (be honest)
2) if there is any thing rong with it wot is it?
3) any sugestions to make it better plzz

 

[MentaL]

aint a fan tbh, sand too plain

 

[BeaverLJ]

aint a fan tbh, sand too plain

1) wot wud u give it out of 10 (be honest)
2) if there is any thing rong with it wot is it?
3) any sugestions to make it better plzz

punk: punk:punk: punk:

 

[Ripman]

add more objs on the map....

 

[NightScare]

Not to bad for a first attempt, id give it a 4/10

as ppl says, needs more details..a town and some more Objects would make it look a whole lot better

 

[Toxick]

to plane, not enough tiles being used, same objects for the beech try mixing it up.... not enough detail in it, you could of spent a bit longer with it, i would give it 1/10

 

[BeaverLJ]

thanks for commets thats an average 2.5/10 :P lol

next time i will spend more time on it i think and i will use more tiles

 

[Shinoda]

1) wot wud u give it out of 10 (be honest)
2) if there is any thing rong with it wot is it?
3) any sugestions to make it better plzz

1) 5/10

It's actually not a bad map, the island shape is nice and random.. not too square like I have seen with some maps.

It's got 2 cave entrances, or you could use one as an entrance to the island. The town isn't bad.. I would scrap it and make something more defined, make the town seem more organised, scare the ground with some paths and have a more defined entrance.

The rest of the island again, isn't bad... you got a nice idea of what to do but you're missing some fatal things which are needed and what makes your map look bare.

Firstly, you want to put some lovely grass every where, lighter grass near the water and then start the dark @ about the same distance you started the light from the water (if you get me).

Then you simply need more tree's, the variation you have at the moment is good but try to use some more bigger tree's and less smaller ones



EDIT - I would actually start again, stick with the same ideas you had before and just impliment what I said above... and you may want to make the island a little bit bigger... but that doesnt affect how good the map is its just personal taste.

Look forward to seeing Map No.2

 

[Blaminator]

The island looks to artificial

 

[CrazyFox]

Not likeing this Map.
To plain for me lol but the shape is good.

i might amke a map .

 

[NewHope]

The more time you put into a map, the better it will become... well thats what i found lol.
Nice map, but with more time it could be alot better.