Post your poems here...

[SLiM3000]

Well as title says post your poems, made this one today, a quick and short one.

The lamps now glitter down the street,
the faint sound of mace's feet.
The blue sky slowly falls,
around sabuk's trees and walls.

Now in the falling of the gloom,
mace's flame field paints the room.
and fire it looks upon the roofs,
and the flickers from the books.

Mace's army marches on, by gate by wall,
the city burning in roary fire.
Till he gazes around the room,
his army falls, around the walls.

Then once again Mace returns,
again he try's to take the walls.
And just below the sabuk walls,
Mace's army rises and go's.


Did'nt get too finish it, as i had to go out Anyways post yours here

 

[duckanddive]

Ok heres one i wrote


I am a little duck in a pond,
I AM I AM.
I am a little duck in a pond,
indeed i am, indeed i am.

THE Smelly old man throws bread at me,
he does he does,
who is a smelly old man,
he is, he is.

SHAME on that man, shame on the bread,
indeed, indeed
shame on everybody
indeed, indeed.

I am a duck in a pond i am,
and that little duck hunts the fox,
indeed i am.


I wrote that.

 

[SLiM3000]

well very good, NOT. if you aint gonna post good poems dntpost at all, now get back to your pathetic non-sence of a server.

fag.

 

[duckanddive]

Fag? You asked me to post a poem so i dick you redneck homophobic cant write a story to save his life SOB.

So heres another poem.

I am the reaper of day and night,
the one who kills and the one with fright,
body can see me and everyone fears me,
i am the reaper of your day and night.

come the day the reaper comes true,
your life is mine, nobody for you,
came as you are, no stone unturned,
green as your eyes as your skin is to begin.

maggots who seek flesh to be eaten,
i am the reaper every life is to be taken,
the black has come the darkest day is to unfold,
i am the reaper, i am very black and i am very bold..

Your signature inspired me.

 

[SLiM3000]

Fag? You asked me to post a poem so i dick you redneck homophobic cant write a story to save his life SOB.

So heres another poem.




Your signature inspired me.

thats better you noob.

 

[duckanddive]

Ive wrote allot of poems, i use it to express myself when i feel like smashing up the wall, glad you appreciate.

 

[anto]

My name is anthony,
I come from hattersley.
But im on lomcn,
So im trying to get a poem written.
This place is full of wierdos,
And that's not including the geeks, scallies, and hoes.

One day i'll make it big
'Till then i'll just smoke this sig.
You may believe smoking is bad,
But then people would call you sad.
Once i've smoked this,
I'll go and have a piss

My poems nearly at the end.
My heads going round the bend.
I've just had a nicki rush.
Now i realy have a sicky mush.
Now i've just been sick,
I'll bid you farewell and call you all a prick.

 

[Far]

Here I lie in stinky vapor,
Because some ******* stole the toilet paper,
Shall I lie, or shall I linger,
Or shall I be forced to use my finger.

 

[SLiM3000]

Here I lie in stinky vapor,
Because some ******* stole the toilet paper,
Shall I lie, or shall I linger,
Or shall I be forced to use my finger.

ROFL, nice how long it take you a few seconds?

 

[Vannaroth]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Most poems rhyme
This one does too


bet you werent expecting that one.

 

[Colonel]

Well as title says post your poems, made this one today, a quick and short one.

The lamps now glitter down the street,
the faint sound of mace's feet.
The blue sky slowly falls,
around sabuk's trees and walls.

Now in the falling of the gloom,
mace's flame field paints the room.
and fire it looks upon the roofs,
and the flickers from the books.

Mace's army marches on, by gate by wall,
the city burning in roary fire.
Till he gazes around the room,
his army falls, around the walls.

Then once again Mace returns,
again he try's to take the walls.
And just below the sabuk walls,
Mace's army rises and go's.


Did'nt get too finish it, as i had to go out Anyways post yours here

started off rhyming(shown in bold) then it all went to pot was pretty gd tho, rathered farril's n1

 

[SLiM3000]

started off rhyming(shown in bold) then it all went to pot was pretty gd tho, rathered farril's n1

yup, did get abit ****ty :*(

 

[Far]

Here I sit
Broken hearted
Tried to Sh1t
But only farted

 

[duckanddive]

i look at farril
and i see the green
huge like the hulk
but mean as a machine


-- edit, figure i do 1 on dataforce

notice the text drifting on the screen,
data it comes and the force is seen,
he is the one who brings the service be true,
dataforce is his name, better watch out..

hes watching you.

-- skyline

i am skyline,
cry cry.

 

[Vannaroth]

basically, slim, your poem makes no sense.

"One day this bloke Mace attacked this city for no reason, he marched down the streets and found himself in a room filled with flickering books. Then he went back to the city again only to find himself in the same room once more. Looking around the room causes his army to fall and shortly after come back. then he used the word ''wall'' 3 times in 1 and a half stanzas. then it rose and went somewhere but its not made clear what is meant by that."

also 'roary'? whats wrong with 'roaring'? at least thats actually a word.

 

[Zidio]

poems are pap and poo
i dont see the point do you
why are you here
adicted to mir
you should drink a beer
whilst jamming on mir

You could kill a deer on mir
with out fear
but maybe you didnt hear
about the killer deer
that wiped out mir out
for about a year
o dear o dear o dear

got no more words that ryme with mir
so i guess ill end it here

 

[duckanddive]

(vans sig)

satan fish is big and red,
look at the black and the chissels instead,
clouds i see underneath the evil,
satan has a fish and i name him fred.

hello fred

--------

colonel now

the mafia is who i am and they look after me, its true,
blood pact we bring, leave and you will be through,
guns will be blazing and fire will be brought,
watch out for the mafia because this insurance is not what you bought.


so easy.

 

[SLiM3000]

roary as in filled with fire, also mace is going to the wall with his army (guild)

Flickering books, switching from book to book...

 

[SLiM3000]

go and kill some bats,
you arrogant twats.

got no more words that rhyme with mir...
so suck my ballz.

 

[Salad]

Im bord
slims poems
suck suck
but after
then i read on
the poems suck more
i own.

This poem was really from the heart