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[JealY]

was messing about and threw this up, im unsure about it though.

/J34lY

 

[Robert]

Good









God

Looks ok but i think the pink and the picture are just too weak if you get me

 

[FUTURA]

Font = NO! I think Scriptina would look good.

 

[Perebble]

I think the font is ok, just the positioning is wrong.

Whatever you do, don't use Scriptina.

 

[JealY]

Good









God

Looks ok but i think the pink and the picture are just too weak if you get me

who made you an 'art critic' ? - Edit - thats it, change your title, you doofus, muahahahah!

thats the idea, brains.

Edited the text.

/J34lY

 

[Skibadee]

lol and u have the right to say eeeww at my work!!

ok.. the bg is very bland and just looks like u slapped a couple of brushes on, the render isnt blended very well and the flow is non existant. Id say the typography is the strongest point but still pretty weak. sorry try again

 

[w00t84]

I agree totally with Skib on this one, that's auful. It's really too plain, and a bit 'girly' if you ask me, 'are you a man or a mouse?' that comes into action here.

The backround is extremely bland and colourless, and the text is still bad even on the recent one. I hate the render, although that has nothing to do with you.
One thing is that the render is blended well... Change the colour, text & render then you might be getting somewhere :P

2/10 [Not very often I give marks this low, but I really don't like this piece, sorry.]

Quote from Skib.

lol and u have the right to say eeeww at my work!!

Good point... He does it all the time -_-

 

[Skibadee]

heh well tbh i only post stuff here to show u guys how im progressing not for the comments... i get realy comments from professional Ps"ers" at my other forums alot of ppl here are haters ... but it is a mir forum i guess!!! haha they spend too much time bummin out on games :P

 

[w00t84]

Add me to msn mate... I got this new msn I can't work out how to use it :P
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[elohelMeight]

dont mind this piece... just think its a bit too bright
6/10

 

[Atomicide]

somthing about it is kinda intreesting but im not sure what. good work 8/10

 

[JealY]

and a bit 'girly' if you ask me, 'are you a man or a mouse?' that comes into action here

well unlike some im confident with my sexuality and i can use pink, yes pink steish the colour you all-so-afriad of, run now, quick, before it gets you, omg, too late, bye bye. besides, like i said im trying something out, it's not half finished, i just thought if i'd post it and nobody liked then i wouldn't finish it.

/J34lY

 

[w00t84]

You botched you're quote.

I posted what I think and I think it's a bit better than 'Eeeewww'

 

[elohelMeight]

and a bit 'girly' if you ask me, 'are you a man or a mouse?' that comes into action here/quote]

well unlike some im confident with my sexuality and i can use pink, yes pink steish the colour you all-so-afriad of, run now, quick, before it gets you, omg, too late, bye bye. besides, like i said im trying something out, it's not half finished, i just thought if i'd post it and nobody liked then i wouldn't finish it.

/J34lY

spot on!!! pink is exactly that... but some people still have to say your 'a gay boy' as they are that childish still

 

[RedDragonX]

looks ok, 6/10

/200000000000

 

[elohelMeight]

ive just been looking at the siggy... and dont know why you chose black for the border??? surely white would have blended better with the light pink?

 

[FUTURA]

Pebble...Scriptina too played out? Nah maing, LoMCN, being the cats (meow meow) that they are rinsed it out. It's still a good font when used properly...

 

[elohelMeight]

did you just say cats meaning people? westwood wannabe... and westwood is a fool.