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elohelMeight

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this is a bit better than the last 1... so im going to dedicate this to beard instead... as hes the critic we will know if this is better than my other



C&C :)
 

Robert

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I have to say when i opened this thread i looked at it for a while.

Theres something pleasing on the eye about it, and something that captures the viewer in a kind of awe.

This said i like the concept but again try and make it more wow. Blue and black work if theyre the correct shade, darken both or maybe try some new colours

7/10 better.
 

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Better font but it doesn't match the image. Look long and hard at your font, it has to sing when you choose it :lol:
 

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I like that, you're font sucks though... Well not so much the font, but the sharpness, set the font to "Normal" on size 12 that will sort it out for ya ;)

8/10, I like this.
 

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lol steish... that is the font you told me to donwload and use... now that people say it sucks you tell me to use another
 

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No, you musn't be able to read... I didn't tell you to change font, I told you how to sort the font out...
 

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Radial Blur on zoom setting with placstic wrap, nothing special.
 

w00t84

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Pyraine... He's just started doing graphics and most people follow tutorials when they first start. I didn't like, I taught myself it :P Personally I can't do tutorials :P Mine always look fked if I follow tut ;)
 

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tbh... all the people into graphics on these forums told me to follow tuts as soon as i said i was getting ps... im not exactly going to start making my own work when i know that all i will get for it is flamed
 

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Follow tuts, but.. why post them, if you look at your work and see they are the same as the final piece in the tutorial, you know you've followed it correctly, why do you need the people of LOMCN to tell you?
 

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because i dont completely follow the tut... otherwise there is no point creating the pieces... that would be pointless... you would only need to read them
 

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it's still not really worth posting though is it, because how come someone comment on something that is 99% tutorial, tutorials are never meant to look fantastic, and are just there to help you get ideas on how to make better images of your own, you really shouldnt just follow a guide and then post it expecting positive feedback, read like 10 tutorials, incorporate the best bits into your work, then it's your own, and you're at a reasonably good starting point.
 

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i wasnt exactly expecting positive feedback as i know, a weeks work of ps, isnt going to get any good marks.