it's still not really worth posting though is it, because how come someone comment on something that is 99% tutorial, tutorials are never meant to look fantastic, and are just there to help you get ideas on how to make better images of your own, you really shouldnt just follow a guide and then post it expecting positive feedback, read like 10 tutorials, incorporate the best bits into your work, then it's your own, and you're at a reasonably good starting point.